The Princess and the Frog, Rewritten: What If Tiana Fought the Shadows?

Less time as a frog, more time as the hero of New Orleans.

The Princess and the Frog (2009) gave us Tiana, one of Disney's hardest-working heroes; a gorgeous 1920s New Orleans; a villain with serious style in Dr. Facilier; and great jazz. REAL: it was Disney's last big hand-drawn princess movie.

But fans have one big complaint: Tiana spends most of the movie as a frog. So here's our rewrite.

The magic is bigger, and scarier

Dr. Facilier isn't just a con man with a few tricks. He made a deal with mysterious shadow spirits, his "friends on the other side," and they want something much bigger than money. The shadows are spookier, the stakes are higher and the whole city is in danger.

Tiana learns to fight back

After she's turned into a frog, Tiana doesn't just wait for someone to fix it. Mama Odie, the wise old woman of the bayou, teaches her to use her own gifts: her determination, her cooking and her knowledge of the city. Tiana becomes the one who can stop the shadows.

Naveen has a secret

The prince's family made a bad bargain with the shadows generations ago. Facilier isn't just cursing him; he's collecting on an old debt. Naveen has to face his family's mistakes.

Facilier gets in over his head

He thinks he's in control. He isn't. The spirits are using him. By the end, he realizes it too late.

The final act: shadows over New Orleans

On Mardi Gras night, the shadows spill out of the bayou and into the streets. Lanterns flicker. Music stops. Tiana and Naveen, frogs no more, lead their friends, including Louis the alligator and Ray the firefly's family, to drive the shadows back. Naveen risks everything to close the door between worlds.

The ending

Facilier is gone, and the city is safe. Tiana opens her restaurant, and by night, she keeps an eye on the bayou. Just in case.

What the original nails

Tiana's story is about hard work, and about learning that hard work isn't everything. Her dad's message is that what you need and what you want aren't always the same. Ray's love for his faraway star, Evangeline, is the sweetest and saddest part of the movie. And the songs are wonderful.

What our version breaks

Our version gives Tiana more action, which is great. But turning it into a monster battle pushes the heart of the story aside. In the original, Tiana's big change is learning to make time for love and joy, not just work. In ours, she's too busy fighting to learn it. And Ray's quiet goodbye wouldn't fit in a war.

A note on the magic

The original film was based on New Orleans legends, but some people were concerned that it borrowed from Vodou, a real religion practiced by real people, and used it as villain magic. In our version, the danger comes from made-up shadow spirits, not from anyone's real faith.

The lesson

More action can make a hero look stronger. But a hero's growth, not her power, is what makes a story stick.

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Jesse Bray

Dr. Jesse Bray is an animator, educator, software developer and learning systems architect.

https://www.mrbray.com
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